Friday, October 24, 2008

My Dream Car


I dont want nothing crazy like a rocket and stuff like that, but I would want to drive a 59 impala with spoke tire and have switches on it and have white leather on it and the outside paint would be a blue looking color. But later if I don't end up having that kind of car then it's all good as long as I have something.



1 comment:

Beka said...

Great car! I wouldn't mind driving that around. :)

The first sentence is a run-on. You have a choice. You can make it into two sentences or you can use a comma and "but".

See what you can do with that. Also check for other little things as you read through it.

This is a great post, nicely written, and you close it really well.