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If there were one thing that I would keep if I had to give away every thing I own it would be my books. I would keep my books because they help me disappear into another world. I love to read and forget about all my problems for awhile. I also like to curl up with a blanket and I like to turn on some music. I like to read for hours, but if I cant have all the other stuff at least I would like to have some books to read.

Journal

The only thing that I can think of that would be hard for me to get rid of are some rosaries that I have. It's not anything big, but they mean a lot to me because the rosaries I have belonged to one of my homeboys that passed away and that's the only thing I have of his besides pictures.

Anger Story

One time that I was in detention I got introuble because the staff said that I was having non verbal communication with another youth. He later pulled me aside and told me I got a violation and because of that I wouldn't be able to stay out for late night and watch a movie.
I got mad and yelled and cused at the staff, and went to my room and slamed the door and refused what they told me to do.
What I should of done is not say anything to staff and just go to my room instead of arguing because either way I wasn't gonna win, and maybe we could have just talked and I would of still been able to stay out for late night.

Journal

If I were on coles Circle Justice, I would have just locked him up. Because I dont think that the island would have worked because that gives him more time to just build up anger, and next time he's round people he would want to beat them up to take his anger out.

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His daughter asked a question. It was a difficult moment.

The fog was thick, so it was hard to see.

He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.

He threw the grenade and it made a sound.

Kiowa gave him some advice, but it didn't help.

He gets upset when he thinks about the war.

Winter Break

Well my winter break was crazy I went outside for hours untill I made that big snow man I said I was gonna make. For awhile I was stuck inside because of all the snow and ice, so for a couple of days I felt like a prisoner because I had to stay inside and couldn't go out anywhere.
As for my Christmas it was pretty kool, I got a couple of present like sweaters and some shoes and a pretty tight hair cut machine but nothing really big. I also spent alot of time with my family and I ate alot of food that my mom made and incase your wondering some of the things that we ate were tamales,posole, and tacos. Oh yea I also went over to my gurls house and made brownies and cookies with her and her family so that tight.